by Ashley ListerRather than force my political opinions on everyone, I thought I would take this opportunity to look at a poetic form from outside the gamut of traditional western culture. This is a ghazal from the poet Zahhar:
Offering – (ghazal #61)Zahhar
I trudge now back through this grime for youBecause it may ease the climb for you.
Because you just might learn from my pain,I re-walk that bitter rime for you.
I’m told there are riches deep within,So I search this fetid slime for you.
I seek rubies in the cave of loss,Yet I’m glad to spend the time for you.
The earth and stars all could have been mine,But I’ve passed these chances prime for you.
I’ll peel the rind and my soul expose,Then wait as a silent mime for you.
Pearls were buried with my heart, you see,So I dig back through the lime for you.
If in your depths these words resonate,Zahhar is sounding a chime for you.
Eric Folsom says: “The ghazal, many will tell you, is an ancient Persian form of verse. The OED notes that it is generally erotic in nature, limited in the number of stanzas, and uses a recurring rhyme. The western impression, dating back to the last century and earlier, is that ghazals celebrate love and wine, but it is interesting to discover that ghazals can be found today in modern pop music. The Indo-British singer known as Najma for instance, uses a number of ghazals (in Hindi if my memory is correct) as the lyrics of her songs. They are quite haunting, long soft syllables with tabla and saxophone solos, and gist of the words amounts to no more than the usual hyperbole of love song lyrics.”
So here we have it: a poetic form from outside our typical culture.
The ghazal is a short lyric poem composed of a series of about 5 to 15 couplets. Each couplet stands independently on its own as a poetic thought. The meter is not strictly determined but the lines of the couplets should be of similar length. Aside from the refrains and couplet structure the ghazal could also include the poet’s name or a meta-reference to the poet. To find out more I would strongly urge you to visit Gene Doty’s ghazal page and possibly enter one of the ghazal challenges.
Or, if you don’t fancy being so adventurous, we could have our own ghazal challenge here. I’ve written my own ghazal below. We have themes of politics and ice cream and dreams to play with this week. If you’re up for the challenge, why not write your own ghazal and post it in the comments box?
Stick another jumper on your grandmaRub a tub of Ralgex on your grandpa
Heating costs are going through the roofThe Big Six act like they’re all gangstah
Winter is-a-coming. The bills are getting high.The Tories kill more old folks than the cancer
Do I starve this year or maybe freeze?I must beg advice from a financer
God, how did our country come to this?I don’t think God has got an answer.
