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Sapphic Sleepaway Camp: Wish You Weren’t Here by Erin Baldwin

Posted on the 10 August 2024 by Lesbrary @lesbrary

Sapphic Sleepaway Camp: Wish You Weren’t Here by Erin Baldwin

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Priya Freaking Pendley seems to have everything a girl could ask for: social media stardom, the handsome track captain boyfriend, and millions of adoring fans. Juliette might have to live with that during the school year, but at Fogridge Sleepaway Camp, Juliette reigns. It's the one place where she can be herself instead of too "intense." Their last summer before college, Juliette is ready to make the most of her summer, until she finds Priya as her lone bunkmate. Can she tolerate her childhood rival while making the most of her summer, or will Priya ruin it all?

The premise of two high school seniors dealing with their animosity while they're forced to bunk together at sleepaway summer camp? Sign me up! This was a soft, heart-warming, great first step for a debut author. I'm curious to see what Baldwin will write next. I adored Baldwin's ability to capture the magic and nostalgia of sleepaway summer camps. You'll fall into the atmosphere as you read this one, with crickets chirping, twigs cracking, and the scent of burning firewood in the air. The queerness is authentic and natural; not overly discussed, but instead one beautiful aspect among many for several characters. Juliette's story is one of self-realization and acceptance; perfect for a young adult about to make their way into the world.

From the story's premise, I expected so much more tension from the start; animosity with reason. Instead, these two girls just...dislike each other. That's it. It's blown out of proportion, overdramatic in the prettiest sense. Juliette has no other reason for disliking Priya beyond the fact that everyone else adores her. Yes, that can get annoying, and I understand that high school girls develop "frenemies" (I honestly don't think that's the right term for what's going on here, but "enemies" and "rivals" are too strong) growing up, but you don't feel anything that Juliette feels toward Priya in this story. Once Priya arrives at camp, you start to see who she is beyond the glossy veneer, which I love, but Juliette's slow abandonment of her hostility toward Priya doesn't seem earned because it doesn't start with any real strength. It just seems like... she's so used to disliking Priya, that she can't recall why she really does. The first chapter, at the party, really should have enforced their disdain for each other. Instead it's just... there. There aren't any real sparks of chemistry, either; just an entirely too slow burn that eventually leads toward an anti-climatic queer awakening. There was so much room for forgiveness and character development and instead every moment just felt flat and underproduced.

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