This is one of the best lesbian vampire books I've ever read. While not without its flaws, it stands out for the development of its two protagonists, its prose, its humor, and its well-developed setting.
Mindy and Lucia start off by rekindling their childhood friendship on Mindy's pizza routes, in the easy way that friendships develop when you're that age and don't need to make plans to spend time with people. While the characters are in high school, though, Ex-Wives of Dracula doesn't feel at all like a young-adult book, rather more like a classic bildungsroman, colored with an adult perspective on being young. Soon, Mindy confesses that she's been questioning if she's gay to Lucia. Mindy's doubts feel real. To me it's obvious she's into girls, but it's exactly the same way my sexuality was a riddle to my high-school self yet so obvious in hindsight. Then, Lucia breaks up with her boyfriend. Then, Lucia kisses Mindy. Then, she gets back together with her boyfriend. Then, she gets turned into a vampire.
Lucia's hot-and-cold, off-and-on affections should be familiar to any queer woman who had her heart broken by a straight girl. Lucia's not so straight, though, and the clues are there from the start.
"I really tried with him," Lucia said. Her voice wasn't rattling with emotion any more, it was just quiet. Which was even worse. "I really thought I was a good girlfriend. I was gonna-wash his clothes and fix him pies and shit. I would've done anything to be a good girlfriend."
"You were a great girlfriend," Mindy assured her. "He's just an idiot. He's an idiot who never even got to know you well enough to know what he's gonna be missing. He's gonna be big and fat at the high school reunion, and you're going to be super-hot and married to a senator. He won't even know why he let you get away."
"I did anal!" Lucia cried to the florescent lights. "What more is a girl supposed to do, huh?"
We learn, though, that Lucia's ambiguity has at least as much to do with her feeling inferior to Mindy-dumber and poorer-as it does with internalized homophobia. She hurts Mindy not because she's deliberately toying with her, but because she doesn't know how to deal with a relationship on top of her family's dysfunction and her own uncertainties about her future.
Mindy works out much faster that she likes girls and is more together, but she's flawed too. When Lucia confesses that the reason she doesn't want to drink Mindy's blood is because she'll lose control, Mindy convinces her otherwise, then hypocritically blames Lucia when, later in the book, she does lose control. Mindy is also certain that Lucia is wrong about something that Lucia is right about, with tragic consequences for everyone involved.
The dialog is often hilarious, and moments of humor mark the rest of the book too. It veers from the absurd, like Lucia going through Mindy's list of bad tippers to find people to feed on, to the silly, like when Mindy disinvites Lucia to pretend to be hitting her with a hadouken, to the dark: "This is why communication is so important," she said to Lucia. "Imagine, thinking I had something against murderous rampages..."
Kaplan uses the humor well to contrast the serious and sometimes horrific elements in the rest of the novel.
Kaplan writes a lot of great descriptions, and some of the best come in the horror scenes.
He pulled. She bit. The skin gave and his blood flooded her mouth. It wasn't warm, it wasn't salty. It was cold and thick, knotted like old cough syrup. She wouldn't release her hold on him to spit it out. She swallowed and felt it all the way down her esophagus, cold and heavy. It sat in the pit of her stomach like she'd eaten dry ice.Out in the hallway, she gasped so hard she nearly dropped the tray. The footprints Mindy had so assiduously cleaned up, with Swiffer mops and Resolve Spot & Stain, were still there in ghostly form. They'd metastasized into mushrooms with long, slender stalks and caps the size of tennis balls, with small siblings alongside them. The patches of fungus went up the stairs. One for each step Lucia had taken.
One of my complaints about lesbian genre literature in general is that the prose is often not good, and I love to find novels that I enjoy reading just for the writing.
Her descriptions capture suburban Texas well, and the football-obsessed high school and town surrounding reminded me of the town I lived in in high school. The idea that one of those towns would welcome a vampire, as long as he was a good football coach, is scarily plausible to me. I also liked the way that Kaplan wove real-life life horror, an adult man who obsesses over a teenaged girl and interprets her actions as romantic love, into the character of the vampire. I also liked when Lucia revealed vampire existence to use it against the vampire who turned her, and that the rest of the novel didn't ignore this like it never happened.
One modern vampire trope in this novel that bugs me is vampires that can cross miles in seconds, with no mention of sonic booms or problems with ground shattering beneath their feet. (I think Twilight popularized this trope, but I don't think it originated there.) Two other flaws are spoilers.
[Spoilers below]Seb starts off as comic relief, FunnyF oreigner; from Romania. This is always a fraught trope, and I have mixed feelings about how Kaplan uses it here. Later's, he's arguably StuffedInTheFridge; to make Mindy surrender herself to the vampire. The reason I say "arguably" is because, at least in my interpretation of the trope, one of its key properties is the lack of agency in the character's death. Without this, it's too easy to call every character death an example, because a death without any impact on any character isn't going to have an impact on the reader, either. Seb puts himself in danger to save Mindy, so he has agency in his own death. Another point is that killing off a straight male character to motivate a not-straight female character doesn't have the same baggage as the reverse. That said, this all is enough to trouble me, so I'd call it a flaw.
I also wish the ending had shown a little more of Mindy and Lucia's future together, to indicate that maybe a two-vampire relationship would work out and that they could find some sort of happiness together. That is, however, a quibble. There's not much more serious commitment than what Mindy does for Lucia, after all.
