Glenberg and colleagues are trying to develop a broad embodied framework that can encompass both traditional hunting grounds like perception and action but also 'higher order' cognition like social cognition and culture. I admire the effort but to my mind this is grounded cognition, not embodied and so this is not an approach I'd endorse. I like to review papers like this though because it's healthy to have an adversarial reviewer who tries not to be evil (I promise!), and because I also like to keep myself informed about the work I'm rejecting so that I don't start fighting straw men.
Soliman et al ground their approach in Proffitt's theory about the action-scaling of distance perception. I reviewed a recent point-counterpoint on this topic (Firestone, 2013; Proffitt, 2013) that summarises the key facts about Proffitt's theory. In particular, one key finding is that people judge things to be farther away when it requires more effort to cross that distance (because they are tired, for example, or carrying a heavy load).
Soliman et al go looking for this kind of change in distance perception as a function of social group membership. If they can find it, they argue that this would license them to discuss perceptual and cultural/social factors in the same theoretical framework, unifying psychology. They therefore ran a study in which they had people judge the distance to ingroup and outgroup members. The logic is this (bear with me, it's a long walk):
- Interacting with someone requires you to (unconsciously) mentally simulate things they do
- We do this simulation ahead of time, in anticipation of an encounter
- This simulation will require more effort with out-group members, because they do things differently to you
- This increased simulation effort will affect your judgment of distance, as per Proffitt
- Therefore out-group members should look further away
The results seemed to support this set up. In two experiments, there was an interaction between self-construal and judged distance to in- and out-group members. Interdependent people rated the distance to ingroup members as smaller compared to independent people (suggesting their increased practice interacting with ingroup members resulted in less effortful simulations). In the second experiment, the result flipped for outgroup members. This interaction suggests the two self-construal groups are using different metrics to judge the distance, and Soliman at al claim that these metrics must be effort based because of Steps 1-3 above.
Figure 1. a) Results of Experiment 1. b) Results of Experiment 2. See Soliman et al for details
My commentaryI wrote a commentary that summarised my primary concern from the review process. I didn't even get into the problems with the idea that we mentally simulate upcoming social interactions, because to be honest I barely know where to start. I think this is a ridiculous idea but I haven't had time to get into it deeply enough to justify a critique on this basis. I instead focused on the (mis)use of Proffitt's action scaling theory. The discussion between Firestone (2013) and Proffitt (2013) was extremely useful here, as was the fact I'd reviewed it for the blog.In our embodied cognition paper (Wilson & Golonka, 2013) we laid out a 4 step research strategy that embodied cognition research should follow. Those steps are
- What is the task to be solved?
- What resources are available to solve the task?
- What are the viable ways you could combine your resources in order to solve the task?
- What does the organism actually do?
Why pick on this point? Because it matters, and because Soliman et al very explicitly hung their hat on this peg. They want to unify psychology, but they fail because the pieces they use simply cannot be assembled the way they claim, and it's this fairly common problem in psychology that bugs us the most. If we ever want to do great science, we need to get serious about our mechanisms.
Commentary at Frontiers
I enjoyed the ability to write this commentary based on my reviews. I was reviewed by Guy Dove and Arthur Glenberg, both of who were fair and constructive. My critique is now part of Guy's special topic and a permanent companion to the Glenberg article, and so I hope people reading the main paper will at least be made to think. I think this format and connection is a nice feature of Frontiers and helps treat published work as part of an ongoing discussion, rather than a static document.Reviewing at Frontiers
Why did I let the paper through? I had the option to withdraw as a reviewer if I thought the paper was so flawed, and I nearly did.My original review raised many problems with the data analysis as well as with the theory. Glenberg and colleagues actually did a good job of fixing those problems and I thought the resulting manuscript was a better piece. Once these problems were fixed, I felt uncomfortable ruling out publication on this theoretical grounds, even though I think they are making a critical error. The data are what they are, and they require explanation; I just think their current explanation is flawed. That doesn't mean there isn't something here to be explained and the study itself was adequately run (not especially sophisticated, but within the range of this kind of work).
Given that it reached this bar, allowing the paper to be published then meant publishing my critique and getting the conversation into the literature, which I thought was not a bad idea.All that said, I still wonder if the right move was for me to withdraw from the review on this issue. This is what you do at Frontiers when you reach an impasse with the authors; it's then up to the editor to replace me or agree with my rejection of the paper, as I understand it. Should I have taken that stand on this critique? I'd be interested in people's thoughts on this!
References
Firestone C. (2013). How "Paternalistic" Is Spatial Perception? Why Wearing a Heavy Backpack Doesn't--and Couldn't--Make Hills Look Steeper, Perspectives on Psychological Science, 8 (4) 455-473. DOI: 10.1177/1745691613489835Proffitt D.R. (2013). An Embodied Approach to Perception: By What Units Are Visual Perceptions Scaled?,
Perspectives on Psychological Science, 8 (4) 474-483. DOI: 10.1177/1745691613489837Soliman T, Gibson A and Glenberg AM (2013) Sensory motor mechanisms unify psychology: the embodiment of culture. Front. Psychol. 4:885. doi: 10.3389/fpsyg.2013.00885 (Download)
Wilson AD (2014). Action scaling of distance perception is task specific and does not predict ‘the embodiment of culture’: A comment on Soliman, Gibson & Glenberg (2013). Front. Psychol. 5:302. doi: 10.3389/fpsyg.2014.00302 (Download)
Wilson AD and Golonka S (2013) Embodied cognition is not what you think it is. Front. Psychology 4:58. doi: 10.3389/fpsyg.2013.00058 (Download)