Synopsis: Suspicion meets desperation in this compendium of dark tales that ignite the inner demons of desperate souls and take them on a violent journey filled with rage, deception, and horrifying acts that will either make or break them. Do they have what it takes to survive or will their worlds continue to spiral out of control?
- Write it. That’s the first step. I wrote it. It didn’t matter how bad it sounded. I wrote an outline and made sure the plot was well laid out. “What is the point of the story?” I asked myself. Don’t get me wrong, character development and story arc are just as important. But you don’t want to sit on the first manuscript too long, or you’ll find yourself sitting on it forever. There’s more than enough time for perfection after the developmental edit, during the dreaded rewriting stage.
- Get critiquing partners. Other writers are amazing resources for critiques. Why? Because they know what it’s like to finish a first draft and how hesitation can prolong submission to the editor. Sending my manuscript to writing buddies who wrote in the same genre eased the separation anxiety. They were honest, asked questions, and revealed blind spots that I totally overlooked. Example: “Instead of information dumping, add flashbacks.”
- Get a writing coach. I had a nasty telling habit that I was desperate to kick. Talking to a seasoned professional helped me understand what telling meant and how to catch myself when I was doing it. Example: “Who are your protagonists and antagonists? What type of people are they? Show how they would react to each situation. What would they say? What's their body language? ”
- Understand the different the types of editors. I had to learn this the hard way. For The Trinity, there was a developmental edit, a line edit, and another line edit by the same person. Then two proofreads. But for When We Swing, I did things different:
- A developmental editor read my manuscript and pointed out inconsistencies in character development, story arc, and things that didn’t seem to fit in or make sense with the plot.
- A line editor went through my manuscript line by line checking for word misuse, spelling inconsistencies, and sentence structure. This is not the same as the developmental editor or a proofreader. Actually, this editor got the manuscript after the developmental edit and rewrite.
- Proofreaders read through the story and checked for grammar, punctuation, and spelling. I don’t think you need an example for that. I found three proofreaders at reasonable prices using fiverr.
- Get beta readers. Beta readers who enjoy the genre read the book before I compiled a list of reviewers. It gave me the chance to get a reader’s input on the story. They asked questions and pointed out holes and things that annoyed them. They identified likable characters and gave details about how the story made them feel.
- Take the criticism. I agree that some criticism is arguable, but I took every question and comment into consideration. If you refuse to take criticism, you won’t learn anything. All the money and time spent on developing your product would be worthless, and you won’t grow as a writer. Period.
Kyla Ross is a horror, thriller, and dark fiction writer from
Detroit, Michigan. She posts suspense and horror flash fiction on her blog at
kyrobooks.com and is the author of a gruesome, suspenseful short story series
titled A Trinity of Wicked Tales and an erotic thriller novel titled When We
Swing—An Erotic Thriller. Kyla’s extreme horror novel, Hotel Holly, will be
released fall 2017.
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A TRINITY OF WICKED TALES + ARTICLE BY KYLA ROSS