Body, Mind, Spirit Magazine

First Flower Ver. 3

By Fiercebuddhist @fiercebuddhist

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Here is the third revision of “First Flower.” This version comes after a discussion with Robert D. Wilson of Simply Haiku. I have cut it down quite a bit from the others and have modified the line breaks as well. Enjoy.

Read Version 1
Read Version 2

For ideas on editing.


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