reworked cover idea
just completed the third (and hopefully final) draft of the first Free Planet novel, the 83,000 words Custodian.As this book was about three years in the research and a couple years in the writing, the front of the book and the back of the book needed 'stylistically welding'. I've edited, reworked and tightened up the opening chapters and gone through the rest of the opening part of the book so that it ties together better with the attitude, speed and style of the latter part of the book.
To further weld the book, I got rid of the cumbersome Oxford University Corporate History Lesson i.e. Grand Chess Game Crumbling, introduction. I also got rid of an awful lot of CAPITALISATION-for-emphasis in the rants of the re-wilded Asalah Al Faghori character because, "You're not that thick," and you'll know when you should be 'taking notice'. That's all done, and there's a new cover design.
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