A very talented and inspirational new friend of mine, wrote a part 2 to my “The Ravens eye” Poem. (can’t explain with word’s how much this means to me)
Her name is Soad and I ask that you please take a look at her blog and check out some of her content and amazing writing, By going here——> Soad’s Blog<——
Not only did this new friend of mine write it better than I could have myself,This new friend made my day and me smile in such a way it eclipsed everything bad I have felt this year and turned it into sunshine and laughter.
Thank you so much Soad , I needed to smile today.
I owe ya one!
Here is Soad’s Poem,
The Ravens Eye
The Ravens Eye
Inspired by shanesbookblog
I read a poem with the title “A Raven’s Eye” and I guess I got inspired! I hope this great and successful author doesn’t mind me stealing (borrowing) his idea
The ravens’ eye I wish to flee
That stare’th right Inside of me.
That hollow gaze which drills
My mind
Searching for the
Weak inclined
Thought that passes
From my heart.
Waiting lurking
Stalking still
You shall not
Rob me of my will
I will climb
Atop my mountains
Edge
Waiting for my sweet
Revenge
When I shall
Take what is
Mine and keep
My conscience and my heart
Entwined together
They shall never part
For if they do;
I leave the wind
My secret tool
To nudge me
Softly off my
Stool of
Rock and soul.
And then
That fool
With eyes
So grim
Will not bother
Me a-gain.